Overall i am not a very big fan of this piece. I think the proportions are off and it throws the whole drawing off. The torso/head are particularly bad. They are just slightly too small, but its enough to throw it all off. I also think the arm is way to small. The shading on the shoe is poor, but thats most likely due to my laziness towards the end. I started to get bored of the drawing and it became evident in some areas.
Although this drawing definitely has its weaknesses, it does have some redeeming qualities. For example i quite like the shading in most of the drawing. I particularly like the shading on the arm. I think it shows all the folds in the fabric and looks fairly real. I also really like the perspective of the whole piece. The concept on having the girl swinging and the shot be from in front/ slightly underneath looks really neat. I am glad i risked getting my head kicked in to get the picture.
All in all the drawing isn't awful but it isn't my best. If i were to do it again i would try and improve on the shading and proportions in some areas . I would also try not to let my boredom rush me.
Although this drawing definitely has its weaknesses, it does have some redeeming qualities. For example i quite like the shading in most of the drawing. I particularly like the shading on the arm. I think it shows all the folds in the fabric and looks fairly real. I also really like the perspective of the whole piece. The concept on having the girl swinging and the shot be from in front/ slightly underneath looks really neat. I am glad i risked getting my head kicked in to get the picture.
All in all the drawing isn't awful but it isn't my best. If i were to do it again i would try and improve on the shading and proportions in some areas . I would also try not to let my boredom rush me.